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Contributed by
srugglingyoungster
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Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 06:48:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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To feel your touch
when your near
To feel your lips
locked with mine,
gives me a feeling to secure.
When we talk,
its like two minds in one,
we are on the same level,
we always agree.
To you my love,
my precious one,
To you can i only,
open up with emotion.
For that, im eternily greatful.
Lets raise up our glasses
and shout out a toast!
I'll confide in you,
as you do me.
I'll stand by your side,
if ever you call.
The day you go,
is the day i die.
a solem promise,
but the hardest goodbye.
When you wrap your
arms around me,
my knees are instant jello,
your the only thing holding me up.
Your my god,
my hope,
my faith,
my first true love.
As long as i live,
i could never forget you.
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srugglingyoungster
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2004-07-14 06:48:42]
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Re: You
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by Jackee_line on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 07:06:06 AM AEST
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| Awww love what an emotion, great write. |
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Re: You
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by purplestary on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 07:21:54 AM AEST
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love...the only feeling that effects you in the way it does...it's such an amazing emotion..
great write. |
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Re: You
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 05:31:30 PM AEST
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Oh this is emotion filled......and sounds like real love to me........but please SY don't get hurt! Please go slowly dear, and not to take away your joy......just to be very sure!
Lovely loving poem
love
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