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Im So Alone
Contributed by
willow_tara72002
on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 02:34:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I needed someone to talk to
No ones ever there
I needed a shoulder to cry on
There was no one anywhere
I needed someone to help me
My souls taken all it can bare
Im So Alone
*Chorus*
Everyone Forgets me,
Im alone with my despair
And no one seems to care
My hearts so hard to repair
I've taken all that I can bare
And Im left her alone,
Im So Alone*
Why do I always feel so alone?
My hearts taken all it can bare
Im tired of all the lies
By you people
Cant you hear my cries
Im Dying Inside,
Im So alone
*Everyone Forgets me,
Im alone with my despair
And no one seems to care
My hearts so hard to repair
I've taken all that I can bare
And Im left her aloe,
Im So Alone*
I cant keep holding on
I will soon be gone
Im falling to a world so cold,
My soul has been sold
And now hatred for me is told
And Im So Alone
Im in this world all alone,
Always on my own
Im So Alone,.....
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Re: Im So Alone
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 02:40:49 AM AEST
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Hey you don't need to be so alone . I'm here!
great write
Cheers Robert |
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Re: Im So Alone
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by skelington on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 05:33:30 AM AEST
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| Strong words. You should never feel alone. There are always ppl there to help, if you look in the right places! I too have been where you are in this write. So coming from someone who has been there. Look for the right person to talk to and to be "alone" with. |
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Re: Im So Alone
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by Asatru on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 07:15:56 AM AEST
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| Everyone is alone at times, it just matters how you spend that time. You should soon find out that if you continue writing, you won't feel alone, especially if you post them here. Everyone at this website will always be here for you. Keep writing. |
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Re: Im So Alone
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by drummerchic18 on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 08:24:08 AM AEST
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| if u know a muscian or if u are one....really try to put music to this...it would be awesome. |
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Re: Im So Alone
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 09:56:29 AM AEST
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Awwww Amber, I know how you feel too well, I am feeling alone at the moment, you are not alone as Robert so rightly said, we are all here for you...
takecare
pixie xx
great write btw |
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Re: Im So Alone
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by Aleathiel on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 05:57:40 AM AEST
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ei, we're here...!
this should really be a song you know... |
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