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FAITHFUL
Contributed by
robertkilpatrick
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Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 01:50:41 AM in AEST
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My lips are for your lips only
My body is for you
I will remain Faithful
More Faithful than the Sun
That shines every day a ray
More Faithful than the Tree-Faithfully
Who stands still, through heat and cold-Grows Old
More Faithful than a Lilly in the garden
Who stands waiting for thee
I will remain Faithul
Faithful for you my dear
I will give all
All, I care
I will remain Faithful.
© Robert Kilpatrick
Copyright ©
robertkilpatrick
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2004-07-14 01:50:41]
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Re: FAITHFUL
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 02:07:07 AM AEST
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WOW!! What more can any woman ask for!!!
Great write...
Jenni |
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Re: FAITHFUL
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 02:08:10 AM AEST
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| very sweet expression..venkat |
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Re: FAITHFUL
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by Asatru on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 07:23:16 AM AEST
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| This was a good write and I respect you for your words. Keep writing. |
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Re: FAITHFUL
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 09:57:19 AM AEST
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yes, a great write Robert... well done,
pixie xx |
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Re: FAITHFUL
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 06:10:13 PM AEST
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I like this alot. Faithfulness is something we wish'd everyone would hold near and dear to there hearts.I respect your position!
Angel always...joni |
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Re: FAITHFUL
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 10:05:46 PM AEST
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What a wonderful promise.
A noble write, which is vital as the world dwells in broken loyalty. |
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Re: FAITHFUL
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by PumpkinPie on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 09:59:08 PM AEST
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Comparing yourself to nature makes this piece even more beautiful,for what is more beautiful that nature itself?Nicely done Robert,
PumpkinPie |
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