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I'm Alright
Contributed by
WakeNsnoWboarder
on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 01:08:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I thought that feeling right
was out of sight
But now a glimpse of life
with you fills my mind
with new found hope that I
will be alright
As long as I just hold on tight
I'll win the fight
I'll look at the other side
and see you cry
I crack a smile at the sight
of your glowing eye's
they'll be my light
to guide me through the night
this life is mine
and I will survive
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WakeNsnoWboarder
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2004-07-14 01:08:11] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I'm Alright
(User Rating: 1 ) by Avarice_Riot on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 01:25:32 AM AEST (User
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Powerful in an understated way, this is a thoroughly good poem. 5 stars for you, my friend. |
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Re: I'm Alright
(User Rating: 1 ) by Asatru on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 07:26:28 AM AEST (User
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I am happy that you will overcome what it is you are going through. Good write. Keep writing. |
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