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Another Day Without You
Contributed by
jt
on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 12:59:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I throw back the covers
to another day without your smile to warm me
So cold and alone I turn
and face a world drained of colour
The memories too painful
so I force the past from my mind. Don't look back
But a future without
takes the light from my eyes and I wonder why.....
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jt
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2004-07-14 00:59:12] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Another Day Without You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Asatru on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 07:36:30 AM AEST (User
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This is sad and I am sorry for you, but, everyone is alone some time. Keep writing. |
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Re: Another Day Without You
(User Rating: 1 ) by carmen_queasy on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 11:38:43 AM AEST (User
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That was really sad. It made me feel, it's a pretty deep poem. *hug* |
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Re: Another Day Without You
(User Rating: 1 ) by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 01:49:25 AM AEST (User
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Oh JT I'm so sorry for you......I know the feeling......and if nothing can be changed, then take baby steps alittle each day.....and with time the memory will fade........atleast you will learn to adapt with her.
I'm so sorry
love you
consue
Short but sweet........packed with meaning and tears! |
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Re: Another Day Without You
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 03:59:13 PM AEST (User
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sadly breathtakingly beautiful......... hugs n' love nessa
@->.->:- |
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