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CAPTURED LEAF WITHIN MY HAND
Contributed by
robertkilpatrick
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Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 12:56:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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I Looked at the Sky today
And saw a Rainbow in the distance
Out beyond the long Green Bay
Where seagulls made dance
Over out there, way beyond
The waves of sence resistance
I watched the prism Rainbow fade
And turn into Monolith jade
(Dark Green clouds of a storm)
The wind blew a leaf from it's branch
I reached out, while it made its dance
And with my hand "captured it"
© Robert Kilpatrick
Copyright ©
robertkilpatrick
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2004-07-14 00:56:02]
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Re: CAPTURED LEAF WITHIN MY HAND
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 02:11:15 AM AEST
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Re: CAPTURED LEAF WITHIN MY HAND
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 05:26:52 AM AEST
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Colourful and picturesque. Quite a moment, you captured, too.
Well done. Keep writing. |
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Re: CAPTURED LEAF WITHIN MY HAND
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 06:21:00 PM AEST
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This is the one that slipped by me today! :-(
I'm glad I came back to read it. You "captured" the moment, and the leaf in your hand!
Well done!
angel always...joni |
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Re: CAPTURED LEAF WITHIN MY HAND
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by PumpkinPie on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 09:55:37 PM AEST
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As though time stood still for you,permitting you to analyze the beauty in all of life's little moments.I especially love your poetry,for I can always find myself in that moment too and capture,if only for a moment,part of what you capture as well,and this one connected straight to my heart.
PumpkinPie |
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