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i played death
Contributed by
InnerBeautyQueen
on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 12:46:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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apprehension falling
my requiem calling
obsidian decadence before
the subtle apocalypse
a siege of subterfuge
before i wind up used
valiant prowess followed by
fervent asphyxiation
inevitable captivity
the end of my obscenity
just words beneath my breath
they all mean i played death
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2004-07-14 00:46:08]
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Re: i played death
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by inertia on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 12:49:29 AM AEST
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| this is my favorite of your works...i've read most of them...i like this one...i think it flows very very well...very well done |
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Re: i played death
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by JT on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 12:50:43 AM AEST
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Great wording, great flow. Solid write
-jt- |
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Re: i played death
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by Asatru on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 07:46:04 AM AEST
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| I must agree, this does flow greatly. Keep writing. |
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