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GREAT DAWN
Contributed by
robertkilpatrick
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Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 12:07:44 AM in AEST
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Great Dawn, Great mighty heart Dawn
Elves Wood, leaves of a slumbering wood
New born, wonderful lovely new born
Babe stood, Babe and all his array stood.
In a Scene That's,
A mystical, mystifying, mythical myth
Of Orange, Peachy, Peppery, Peppermint
That speaks to a Dandelion dancing Girl
That dances Daisies, as a Jet Black Jestingly
Jesuit, prances as a prism colored Purpling
Peacock prances, while Tangerine, Tulipy
Thistles grow tall.
A Sun struck sailing ship sails skyward
And the Saffron Moon in the bright Noon Day
Nestles near the nettle nymphs, and below
Beside a bubbling brook, a Benediction of
Badgers by Berries bound, where the
Queen of the mistletoe moonstruck moves
Mid the magic madrigal of a muse.
© Robert Kilpatrick
Copyright ©
robertkilpatrick
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2004-07-14 00:07:44]
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Re: GREAT DAWN
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 12:47:10 AM AEST
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I like this new imagery..particularly these lines are great.."A Sun struck sailing ship sails skyward..And the Saffron Moon in the bright Noon Day"..these indicate mystic rise of individual spirit. best of luck..keep them coming on. venkat
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Re: GREAT DAWN
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 07:53:31 PM AEST
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| great write. keep up the excellent work =] |
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Re: GREAT DAWN
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by emystar on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 09:34:13 PM AEST
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Wow now, u said a mouthfull here.
awesomely creative writing.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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