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If I couldn't
Contributed by
nexxa
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Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 10:36:08 PM in AEST
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If I couldn’t feel for just one day,
Id never known so much pain.
If I couldn’t feel for just one night,
I could dream of a safe and peaceful life.
If I couldn’t feel for just a moment,
the things I say would make a difference.
And if I couldn’t feel for just an instant,
I would change my whole existence.
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nexxa
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2004-07-13 22:36:08]
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Re: If I couldn't
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 05:12:21 AM AEST
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Sensiitivities ravage us all. Its an interesting aspiration - numbness, or moreover paralysis?
I wouldn't enjoy paralysis - I enjoy being paralytic, but that's a different (Saturday night) story . . .
Good poem.
Thanks for sharing, nexxa.
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Re: If I couldn't
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 02:52:36 PM AEST
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Very well written.
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