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the first time
Contributed by
buccaneer
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Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 10:32:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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The first time I tried cheating on someone it was you
smooth soft understanding and
I was afraid to talk to you
When I first talked to you
I was afraid you will yell at me
When you didn't yell,my heart was pleased
but I was afraid to open up the door
When the doors finally opened
i was afraid to step in
Now that I'm in
i'm afraid of losing you.
you are a note to my greatest song
the melody that carried me along.
if only i could know you better
life would mean a little more to me.
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buccaneer
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2004-07-13 22:32:55]
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Re: the first time
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 10:49:44 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, Buccaneer...
Hope you like it here...
Thank you.
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Re: the first time
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 01:44:22 AM AEST
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Going into a relationship is always a bit frightening. I am very glad yours was a great experience. This is a nice write.
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