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everyday is harder
Contributed by
holderofthestone
on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 09:46:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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feeling alone
left as an outcast
the words they speak...
seem hallow.
lies unfold from lips
smiles turn to daggers
snarling traps
I give and give
they take and take
I try to grow
but only break
struggle and fight
everyday is harder
everday seems worse
everyday I want it to end.
how many times can I fail
how many times can I fall
how many times can I be denied?
false words
my teary eyes
laughing glares
inside I die
the more I try
the more I lose
how much more
can one man do
forced to fail
can never win
yet everytime
I try again
but no more
this time I quit
Im so tired of
all this *****....
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2004-07-13 21:46:45]
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Re: everyday is harder
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by Silent-No-More on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 10:25:23 PM AEST
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*sigh*
oh, holder... you've most definately suceeded here! You know that. WE know that!
I've missed your writes.... even though (as is the case here), they often tug at my heart.
SNM
(who did notice the nice flow - but got all caught up in the emotion of this piece) |
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Re: everyday is harder
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by positivelypurple on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 12:33:11 AM AEST
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| I think we have all felt like this at some points in our lives. Very nicely expressed. |
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Re: everyday is harder
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 10:06:26 AM AEST
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you poor thing, we have missed your poems very much I am for one a big fan of your writes, nice to see you back.... great write,
pixie xx |
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Re: everyday is harder
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 06:59:02 PM AEST
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Oh me this is so sad. I can certainly relate. Hang in there my friend, joy cometh in the morning. This too soon shall pass.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: everyday is harder
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 11:56:52 PM AEST
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sorry its been a while I have been on well I really liked this piece a lot very sad but beautiful a very nice rythmic flow...wonderful yet again...
much love,
Dani |
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Re: everyday is harder
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 11:04:47 PM AEST
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| brilliant and amazing. though, not a surprise really. talent makes anything equal to that calibur. failures create success. giving up fails yourself, and the success is, the worst half of everything succeeds. |
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