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Hello Reflection
Contributed by
2ndChance
on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 08:10:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Hello Reflection,
It's been a while
since I've seen that look upon your face.
Hello Reflection,
I've been away
for too long
and have forgotten what you look like.
Hello Reflection,
there's not much to say,
I have nothing to admit.
Hello Reflection,
I've missed the way
you can see right through my mask.
Hello Reflection,
can you still hear,
the painful cries I withhold.
Hello Reflection,
you are the last person
I will ever see.
Hello Reflection,
tell them that I love them,
and that I'm so sorry.
Copyright ©
2ndChance
... [
2004-07-13 20:10:09]
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Re: Hello Reflection
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by InnerBeautyQueen on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 08:17:15 PM AEST
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| sooo sad! good job |
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Re: Hello Reflection
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by drummerchic18 on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 09:07:19 PM AEST
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| excellent job, excellent imagery and excellent word usage and selection |
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Re: Hello Reflection
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by Live2Die on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 12:51:45 AM AEST
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| Let's just say excellent in every way. Except you are going nowhere but out of that hellhole you would like to call home. |
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