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Don't tell me

Contributed by remi on Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 08:07:53 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

DON'T TELL ME CRAP !!

4th of July, 2004
7pm

I'm sick and tire of these people running their mouths about I don't need this things but but they get it everyday do it everyday

They get to be happy and their good lifes to be rich. happy everything people want In a american dreams they bust their ass everyday to keep doing it and then look at me and said u don't need it why won't u give it up u no why cause u like the way it feel

the way it make u feel, everything

So don't tell me crap
So don't tell me crap

I hate when people tell me I'm not missing anything Well I don't see u giving up sex, love, happiness, affecction, childrens, lust, desire, being able to do this with a man

I don't see u giving it up that make u a freaking hypocrite or 2 faced when tell me u not missing anything or don't need it and then u go home and u and ur man make love and have ur kids, ur dream jobs ur happiness and all

and I should give give up why are not giving it up obverilily I'm mising something

So don't tell me crap
So don't tell me crap

U punk how dare u tell me to give up on ***** that u work ur ass to keep everyday
u son of gun, get out of my face
If u love getting, sex, attention, love, respect, happiness, lust a hella of life
then don't u tell me otherwise

punk u don't know crap from adam

Remy Maskantionio

Copyright © remi ... [ 2004-07-13 20:07:53]
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Re: Don't tell me (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 02:05:22 PM AEST
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Oh Remi, I'm so glad you can write.........let the angry flow through your pen.....then you will always feel better!
There are times in our lives when this is most definitely necessary!
Great Write
Warm love
consue

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