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silent demise
Contributed by
InnerBeautyQueen
on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 07:59:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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black curtains drawn
life seems long gone
high held facade
your face now fades
what you’ve become
i’ve long undone
the mask unkept
the tears you wept
the cloak you chose
encompassed those
i knocked on your door
you breathed no more
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InnerBeautyQueen
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2004-07-13 19:59:05] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: silent demise
(User Rating: 1 ) by 2ndChance on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 08:14:36 PM AEST (User
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very unique...I have never seen a take on death like that...one of my instant favorites! |
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Re: silent demise
(User Rating: 1 ) by outdoorsman on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 10:04:26 PM AEST (User
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I really enjoyed your poem
I have felt this way before
Thank you for it |
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