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Love is Suicide
Contributed by
Bloodthirsty
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Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 06:11:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
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In this moment i feel like letting go
Watching the flower of death unfold
Never doing what I'm told
My soul is for sale but my heart is sold
Only for you does my heart ache
Your the only thing real in a world thats so fake
They said falling for you was a mistake
But its one that I am willing to make
I'll hold onto you and never let go
I want to go fast but we better take it slow
I'll try hard not to scare you by letting my emotions show
It's just that I love you
More than you will ever know
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2004-07-13 18:11:04]
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Re: Love is Suicide
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by foxxylady852 on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 06:28:42 PM AEST
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| beautiful poem. |
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Re: Love is Suicide
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by Luinil on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 06:29:02 PM AEST
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very beautiful
i especially like the line 'watching the flower of death unfold' that's very creative
great poem * |
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Re: Love is Suicide
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by torn_skirt on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 06:47:35 PM AEST
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| this is a very good write, and the rymes worked well. Lots of poems that ryme often come out corney...but this one deffinatly did not. Nice work |
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Re: Love is Suicide
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 10:12:27 AM AEST
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very good write,
pixie xx |
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