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emptyness
Contributed by
SocialMisfit
on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 05:44:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Far vaster
than night skies
gazed upon
by human eyes,
Far deeper
than any abyss
yet conceived
to ever exist,
Far higher
than mystics of yore
and prophets past
could ever endure,
You would never believe
What I have seen,
It strikes to the root
Of my very being.
If you could only view
the splendors that lie
beyond the illusions
that deceive the eye!
Do you really think
You know this place?
You see but shadows
And rush to embrace
Emptiness.
Copyright ©
SocialMisfit
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2004-07-13 17:44:58]
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Re: emptyness
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by purplestary on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 05:51:35 PM AEST
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| great write. |
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Re: emptyness
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by ashamaley on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 06:04:03 PM AEST
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| this reminds me of a dream my friend had of herself going to embrace her best friend in a store and then another friend was like, why are you hugging yourself? it is wicked how it feels to realize it may all just be an illusion. but if you can embrace emptiness, you can have it all. |
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Re: emptyness
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by Luinil on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 06:30:57 PM AEST
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| incredible wording... beautiful poem * |
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Re: emptyness
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by InnerBeautyQueen on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 06:59:24 PM AEST
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| ^_^ |
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Re: emptyness
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by SuperGirl on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 07:54:40 PM AEST
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| this is really deep and thoughtful....at least i think so. i can tell you were thinking. |
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