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Me
Contributed by
Rhea
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Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 02:30:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Did you forget...
I'm really not that great,
but what I've done,
I have no shame.
I try to look as though,
There's completely nothing wrong,
but when it really comes down to it,
I'm not that strong.
It's time to break down what we call our wall
so take a step back,
and watch it fall.
Take time to stop and cry...
and I'll think about
not being so shy.
Take time to look,
tell me what you see,
am I what you want...?
Or is it just me?
Copyright ©
Rhea
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2004-07-13 14:30:04]
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Re: Me
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 04:21:02 PM AEST
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| This is a cool poem. I can relate to how you feel sometimes. |
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Re: Me
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 09:00:03 PM AEST
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Rhea, this is an very good poem.
And I also enjoyed reading it.
When you are young......you have little self assurance, but don't give up....it will grow with age.......and then you will no longer be shy!
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