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Fever
Contributed by
IndiraDesha
on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 01:29:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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By
and
by
and
by
--feverishly
I covet her skin in the quiet of my mind.
My synapsis have burned dry.
***** man! When will this distraction end?
The voice within continues to scream beneath
the ceiling I've placed over my dreams.
---Yet---
The earth still moves and two full circles
have passed the midnight sky...
alas, famine has struck
the bed I lie.
And Im starving!
This nocturnal hunger remains unsatisfied,
burns itself through to my innermost layers
surrounds my cheapest thoughts
invades my darkest prayers.
Consciously,
Im remembering our hearts at rest...
flesh curled so tightly...
back to chest...
swaying motions
to the ebb and flow of
our breath
Copyright ©
IndiraDesha
... [
2004-07-13 13:29:17] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Fever
(User Rating: 1 ) by Monkeybones99 on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 01:46:01 PM AEST (User
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Very passionate good write keep up the good work. |
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Re: Fever
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 09:25:44 PM AEST (User
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amazing write. i fully agree with mb. the only part i had a problem with was "And I'm starving!" i think it ruins the tone completely. keep up the excellent work, maybe someday ill progress to this level. =] |
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