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Binary
Contributed by
Ripper_Something_Unusual
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Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 01:03:36 PM in AEST
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She put on her makeup and pretended she was real,
underused circuit boards smelled of fresh sex,
she liked to stay in her binary daydream,
but her download rate dropped everyday
Welcome!
She is yours
imposed on your megabite,
happy valentines,
Broken like a china doll
she has an attraction to fragile design,
wires and sinew
motherboard of mother goose
artificiality is ther speciality,
superficiality is ours
parentaladvisoryexpliticgibberishinanutshell,
Just take it.
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Ripper_Something_Unusual
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2004-07-13 13:03:36]
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Re: Binary
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by 01_zanzebar on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 01:12:22 PM AEST
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always a classic Mr savage, welcome to your-poetryDotCom hope your stay is long and fruitful
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Re: Binary
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by _Raspberry_ on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 02:41:07 PM AEST
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Great write...As odd as this may sound, this poem made me smile. Very good.
Also, a warm welcom to ypdc, I am a fairly new member too, a whole 2 weeks for me! (I think your gonna love it!) |
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Re: Binary
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 09:58:53 AM AEST
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Welcome, first of all. I knew I'd not read anything like 'Dead Bodies In Rivers' before, and while this one isn't as good, it has a good few quirks in it to make me think, and smile, such as;
"motherboard of mother goose"
Somehow I got the impression that you were talking about internet pay-per-view hookers or something . . . lol. Perhaps not, but at least you made me think, right?
Thanks for sharing. |
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