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''A Life''

Contributed by amos on Friday, 25th October 2002 @ 12:15:00 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

This was your last chance
Your time was caving in
There it went
on midnight colored path
All there was
was a body left
All there was
was a pride that left.

You never had the right to be apart of a fight
You never saw what everyone else did
You were cold, alone and always forgotten
Your soul was stuck to the wall
Your mind was visibly open to us all
Why did you care
for the things they did
What did you say
when they mamed your purpose

The case was lost
and you were broken
The rain led me to you
in your unspoken world
You were torn
battered and worn
All I did was lend my hand
BUT it wasn't enough
you evil was so great
You sold your soul
to the one who is full of hate
The responsibility was too much
Your life was sowed together
Patchwork, still and bloody
A mess that none of us figured

It was the glare off the pavement
That told you the truth
Your existence was a time laboring experience
You were so difficult, you were so f***** up
You never had that chance
You never lost that opression
Your evilish grin was the last thing you saw
YOUR HELL WAS GONE
but so were you
Officially unborn
and buried without a grave
Here it was, the life you never had
the life that was broken and torn
The life that was never a life.

Copyright © amos ... [ 2002-10-25 12:15:00]
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Re: ''A Life'' (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 01:59:18 AM AEST
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This is awesome amos... who cares where it came from??

Daniela

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