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Calling For Intervention
Contributed by
Eve
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Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 10:14:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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I'm asking again
For the heavens' attention;
I've been needing it.
There's plenty evil
But angels are welcome here;
I've been needing one.
Could you spare some wings?
Flying on my own's been hard;
I've been needing some.
I lost my angel
Could use angels that don't fall;
I've been needing help.
I've managed to slip
More times than I'd intended;
I've been needing grace.
Copyright ©
Eve
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2004-07-13 10:14:23]
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Re: Calling For Intervention
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by frohemiasweetie on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 10:23:05 AM AEST
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| I loved those. I always thought that haiku were supposed to leave lots of room for interpretation, but you have chained yours together to convey a more easily digestable message. Great. |
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Re: Calling For Intervention
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 08:31:27 AM AEST
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Well written, with a spiritual keen.
Interesting and a worthwhile read.
Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Calling For Intervention
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 11:48:56 PM AEST
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| very nicely done. |
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