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Empty Room
Contributed by
Alyshia
on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 07:51:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Walk into an empty room
Filled with hate, impending doom
Step on broken, shattered glass
That holds a tattered photograph
I can't escape your memory
It feels like you're still here with me
I wish that I could find a way
To make your memory fade away
I try to leave this empty room
Filled with paranoia, gloom
The door is locked, I can't get out
I kick the wall, I scream and shout
I beat my head off of the wall
I wish I wasn't here at all
I throw away my history
But still I have my misery
Finally escape and walk away
But tomorrow is another day
Copyright ©
Alyshia
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2004-07-13 07:51:24]
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Re: Empty Room
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 08:53:05 AM AEST
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| This was a brilliant poem up to the last 2 lines. These 2 lines throw off the poems rhythym otherwise this poem is great. |
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Re: Empty Room
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by SugimotoYouki on
Thursday, 26th July 2007 @ 11:27:09 PM AEST
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Oh my... I'm speechless...
People! What's up with you?! Come and read this wonderful poem! Open your mouth and comment!
I can so relate with this and you've caputred this feeling so well you really touched me deep, deep inside my heart.... |
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