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I cant believe this is how you feel
Contributed by
little_genna
on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 06:20:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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I’ve tried to not feel this way.
Last time I could not say,
Yet this time I want to scream it.
Bit by bit.
You rescued me from my fears.
And stopped my tears.
Our friendship started without this intent in mind.
Yet it hit us as if we were completely blind.
You went away and I missed you so much,
Surprisingly you missed me, just as much.
Your face is the one I see every time I close my eyes.
Talking to you gives me a complete high.
You shocked me when you told me how you feel.
It all seemed way too unreal.
I couldn’t express myself at the time, so I became frustrated.
So we just chatted.
Would you really change your ways just for me?
Are you sure that is how you would want it to be?
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2004-07-13 06:20:21]
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Re: I cant believe this is how you feel
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 07:34:49 AM AEST
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| Love can turn the dark heart to light and make enemies lovers. Your poem shows the power of true love. |
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Re: I cant believe this is how you feel
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 11:35:00 AM AEST
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great poem Gena.... powerful and full of emotions :)
pixie xx |
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Re: I cant believe this is how you feel
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by Lost_Shadow on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 05:27:32 PM AEST
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| I agree with Archie a bit so I guess my heart will stay dark for a very long time. Ah well things never can go right for one person. Great write maybe you can tell me who this is when we next chat. |
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