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Our baby boy......
Contributed by
ravisada
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Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 06:16:24 AM in AEST
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When your mother was crying in pain,
I took her to hospital, then I heard your
mother's loud scream along with your soft cry
Your mother brought you into this world as an angel.
You were lying next to your mother innocently
My son, your cry brought tears of love in my eyes
When I looked at you first my heart filled with happiness
You were looking very healthy boy
You were trying to look at me through your fresh new eyes
I saw your tiny legs were rocking in the air
and your tiny hands were clapping for me
I gave one of my finger to you to hold and you held me tightly
and you want to kiss my finger too
When I wrap you in my arms I felt that my dream come true
We waited for you so long and your arrival made our house lighten
God has listen to our prayers and given you as his gift.
I will be watching you growing up and teach you all the good things
You will be learning all the best and I am sure that you will show me
your best when you wear your cap and gown on your graduation day
Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
Copyright @2004 Ravi Sathasivam
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ravisada
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Re: Our baby boy......
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by Avarice_Riot on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 01:52:10 AM AEST
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| Wow, what a beautiful, gentle and loving piece of poetry...you've captured a mother's love toward her child so very beautifully here. I loved reading it, thanks for posting this up. |
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Re: Our baby boy......
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 08:36:38 AM AEST
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Wow ravi.
This is spectacularly moving, and breathtakingly gentle and caring....
I agree with the other comment, you really have captured a mother's love in this..(not that I'd know exactly how that feel since i'm not a mum)
Very touching, and a great write, ravi!
Thanks for sharing...
~kit |
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