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Walk With Me
Contributed by
pixie
on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 05:34:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Through lush, grassy fields,
Witness the sight that’s so unreal,
Beautiful , blossoming flowers,
Tall trees that stand like towers.
Watch the clouds travel over the sky,
See the butterflies fluttering by,
Listen to the heavenly sounds,
Of creatures softly moving around.
Inhale the smells that are so sweet,
Feel the blanket under your feet,
Taste the cherries from the tree,
Hear the gentle buzzing of a bee.
Curl up in the dew brushed ferns,
Feel the sunbeams as they burn,
Absorb the fresh , warm air,
Take in everything you see there.
Walk with me through nature’s trail,
Under the skies vast, blue veil,
Through the quiet, secluded dells,
This forest has many a secret to tell.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-07-13 05:34:26] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Walk With Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 05:48:13 AM AEST (User
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sweet, its a good effort..venkat |
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Re: Walk With Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 06:42:33 AM AEST (User
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You did a hood job this poem is well written. |
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Re: Walk With Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 10:34:46 AM AEST (User
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I think you did a bang-up job. Pat yourself on the back for you have much to be proud of. Keep on pushing the envelope. You get better all the time.
Smiles,
Rita |
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Re: Walk With Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 01:05:48 PM AEST (User
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excellent write. this shows no signs of being done by an amateur in this topic. well done as always. =] |
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Re: Walk With Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Luinil on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 06:49:17 PM AEST (User
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well written .. makes me wish it wasn't so hot outside so i could go for a walk :) * |
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