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Father
Contributed by
SocialMisfit
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Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 03:21:15 AM in AEST
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father time
natures own religion
many doors are opened
the key to immortality
is the fact or fiction
father he enjoyed the tale
colorful and deep
he was god to me
see man or fiction
the tales I did see
his key to immortality
the stories sent through me
repeated forever
untill fiction fades into
reality.......
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Re: Father
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by Adriean on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 03:26:32 AM AEST
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| I'm sorry about your father. It must be hard, my half brother and half sister lost their father not too long ago ang we are really close. It nearly killed them. Nice write |
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Re: Father
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by little_genna on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 06:55:53 AM AEST
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this is so beautiful yet so sad at the same time. it is never easy to lose a loved one. though this poem is so heartfelt that i wanted to cry. *hugs you* thanks for sharing
much love and hugs
gen xx |
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Re: Father
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by SuperGirl on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 10:24:48 AM AEST
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| i love ya mike *huge hug* |
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