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Beautiful Thoughts
Contributed by
LustGlenny
on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 03:18:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Every time I wake up, every time I go to sleep,
When I’m thinking real shallow, or thinking real deep.
Could be a good or a bad day, doesn’t even matter,
When it enters my mind, it makes my whole world shatter.
But shatter in a good way, not in a bad,
It reminds me of the happiness that I once had.
Throughout the confusion of my life, only one think is true,
It’s the love in my heart, which I’ll always have for you.
Copyright ©
LustGlenny
... [
2004-07-13 03:18:10]
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Re: Beautiful Thoughts
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by Adriean on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 03:24:12 AM AEST
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| Well.... To be HORRIBLY honest, it was very very good. Especially for an undeveloped poet (it being one of your first I mean) it was good |
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Re: Beautiful Thoughts
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by little_genna on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 06:57:48 AM AEST
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| ok im gonna be horribly honest this is damn excellent. specially as you're a new poet! *hugs you* |
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Re: Beautiful Thoughts
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 11:24:54 PM AEST
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Awww... this is remarkably beautiful.... You are quite talented..and very much a hopeless romantic...
Jenni |
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