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tiltleless
Contributed by
MaRy_JaNe_420
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Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 09:24:02 PM in AEST
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my main goal in life is to die
So i stop living this lie
Living is loving HA HA HA
life is a gift BLAH BLAH BLAH
everything i try I fail
other thing i duck and bail
But to life like this for the rest of my life
or to end it all with the slice of a knife
to end up in a 6 foot hole
please just rest my soul
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MaRy_JaNe_420
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2004-07-12 21:24:02]
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Re: tiltleless
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by emystar on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 09:49:47 PM AEST
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Hear wrenching but written well. These type writes break my heart.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: tiltleless
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by matts_sweetie_04 on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 10:13:11 PM AEST
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This poem was well written though it breaks my heart to know you feel this way for i once felt the same way years ago. I wish you luck and happyness!
sMiLe!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: tiltleless
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by deathdrop on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 05:30:48 AM AEST
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short, but effective!
*very good*
i like it where yo put "Living is loving HA HA HA
life is a gift BLAH BLAH BLAH" i know exactly what you mean... |
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Re: tiltleless
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 12:14:48 PM AEST
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| I Like This. It's A Pretty Cool Poem |
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Re: tiltleless
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 05:41:14 PM AEST
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awesome...i feel the same way sometimes...especially this part...
"my main goal in life is to die
So i stop living this lie
Living is loving HA HA HA
life is a gift BLAH BLAH BLAH"
made me smile...but at the same time, i dunno, hard to explain, but anyway - good write
- Bethani - |
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