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All These Thoughts Of You
Contributed by
PieceOfABrokenSoul
on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 09:06:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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All these thoughts of you,
Run through and through.
You are always with me,
In my mind you’re all I see.
I have the fantasy,
Of you talking one last time with me.
I know I’ve really screwed things up,
And it all really left me feeling like a sad pup.
All these thoughts of you,
Cause the tears to break through.
I don’t know why, when, where, or who,
But I know that all I want is you.
(Note any quotations should be aposterphies, for some reason they come up as quotations.)
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2004-07-12 21:06:08]
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Re: All These Thoughts Of You
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by xxbreathlessx on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 09:09:42 PM AEST
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| Very nice. i really enjoyed it =) |
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Re: All These Thoughts Of You
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by matts_sweetie_04 on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 10:18:01 PM AEST
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Again another great poem. I love your work. I just hate that your going through all this. I know its no picnic. Hang in there!
sMiLe!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: All These Thoughts Of You
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by Pollo_Picante1120 on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 01:40:42 AM AEST
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What is the name of this girl your always thinking about? What happened between you two? Not to be nosey or anything, just to help me understand your pain. Something similar to this happened to me and maybe we could share. But this poem is really good. Keep up the good work!!!
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