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I Know How You Feel
Contributed by
iluvpencils
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Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 08:55:31 PM in AEST
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To me, the world is empty
There's nowhere left to run
There's no more warmth in your heart
Just attempts to shield the sun
I'm so tired of being alone
Why does nobody see?
This vulneratbility is killing me
I really want to die
But I'm too scared inside
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Re: I Know How You Feel
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by xxbreathlessx on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 09:14:30 PM AEST
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| wow its really very good. i like the direction your going with this and i would love to read it when you add more to complete it. |
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Re: I Know How You Feel
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 09:36:49 PM AEST
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looks like a good start I think you should change the title however since its about the most cliched comment in the English language.
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