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Nothing

Contributed by xxbreathlessx on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 08:36:54 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



Nothing

I`m nothing of how I want
To be.
Not even the tears that
Cascade down my cheeks
Are free.
They are Prisoners…of me.
Nothing that’s I`d dream
That I would be,
When I was younger
And blinded by dreams.
Nothing of beauty,
Nothing of accomplishment,
Nothing of ambition.
Nothing.
….aren`t I just a mission?
Please send me an escape route,
To escape the nightmare
That haunts me,
The nightmare addicted to me.
That craves my pain,
Licking at every drop of happiness
I have.
Make me new.
Make me whole.
Make me far from nothing,
In this place of escape.
Where I can dance in a translucent
Sky.
That rains tears of
Joy.
Make me different.

Make me happy with myself.




Copyright © xxbreathlessx ... [ 2004-07-12 20:36:54]
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Re: Nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by BrandySwanson on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 08:54:11 PM AEST
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sad and very emotional write. good job

Brandy



Re: Nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by TheVoice on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 08:57:58 PM AEST
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very captivating write. much to think about.

great job

the voice


Re: Nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by apollo on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 07:02:59 PM AEST
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you are a genious. do you want to be one of those? you should ! the way you describe your emotion is very true and the honesty in your words is very compelling.

brandon


Re: Nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Tuesday, 20th April 2010 @ 07:36:51 AM AEST
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key line in this one the last one Make me happy with myself,easier said than done,as you have so eloquently described well written




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