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I shall kill thee....
Contributed by
dysfunction_oral
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Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 07:31:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Upon the head of sorrow,
It pushes the force of mass penetration.
Lean on my shoulder
As I plot a plan to use against you.
So I can have an excuse to control you.
I seek no trust.
I seek no love.
I seek to create death.
My hate.....
Is deeper than the deepest oceans
Higher than the highest mountains
Stronger than the strongest winds.
I want you to weep with the flowers in the field.
I want you to rest in the water
Like the fish in the sea.
I want to avoid your presents
So I shall kill thee.
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Re: I shall kill thee....
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by Archie on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 07:51:14 PM AEST
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| And when you destroy yourself you will see the error of your ways. |
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Re: I shall kill thee....
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by drummerchic18 on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 07:54:45 PM AEST
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| I think your hatred makes great work, actually. Sometimes our best comes from our worst. This is really and honestly an awesome poem. I know, now I sound psychotic, but oh well. Keep the writing, please. I enjoy your work. |
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Re: I shall kill thee....
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 07:58:21 PM AEST
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"I want to avoid your presents" is incorrect unless you plan on coming and taking all our presents away. It should be presence, I think, =)).
Rita |
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Re: I shall kill thee....
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by Kirby on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 08:45:40 PM AEST
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| This was a tottally great poem. Sure ya wanna kill us all, but hey, who doesn't want to one point in time or another! lol! Love::::Kirby |
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Re: I shall kill thee....
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by CrimsonTears on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 08:21:37 PM AEST
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The hatred you have has turned into a very powerful poem...i think it's a good poem...great job
Lots of Love
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