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How could you? How dare you!
Contributed by
Tessalee
on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 04:49:39 PM in AEST
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AngryPoetry
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How could you? How dare you!
You look me in my face and lie, you don’t even try to deny the fact you lie.
You smile at me with that fake wicked smile.
That crooked, vindictive, undeserving of my time smile.
Does she know what you do? Does she say she loves you?
Does she know, does she care to know? As my belly grows
you hold her and moan, swearing you’re alone with no family at home.
How could you? How dare you!
Your forked tongue lies will be your demise. That twisted horned
Demon on your side is going to cause you great pain, and when you are slain he will laugh at his gain. Another delicious unfaithful soul to devour, to feed his power.
How could you? How dare you!
Now it’s my turn to laugh, as the casket goes past, as you lay in hell.
In that thought I will bask, and the thought that you died and are burning alive, cooking from the inside. Your flesh peeling and falling, the thought of you bawling.
The tears searing the raw flesh as you reenter death. How I will laugh.
How could you? How dare you!
Now you can see what you did to me, how I feel when I see our beautiful family.
Now can you feel the pain I feel? Taste the heartache that turned mine to steel? I don’t love anymore nor would I adore, for you took that from me.
Now burn over and over for eternity!
How could you? How dare you!
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Tessalee
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2004-07-12 16:49:39]
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Re: How could you? How dare you!
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by co_cane13 on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 04:56:40 PM AEST
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sorry for your pain. but i must admit i loved it. i loved the way you made it flow so well. and i could just picture someone grinding the teeth in anger as they wrote it. anger seems very real (which i am sure it is). well done.
anger is such a passionate emotion. |
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Re: How could you? How dare you!
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by Rhea on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 06:28:28 PM AEST
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Whoa baby! This was absolutely awesome. I take it this was about a man. Leave it to a man to do such *****ty things. But you should feel better already.....you have a great talent and flow for poetry. Keep up the awesome work! I look forward to reading more!
Best of Luck to you,
Rhea |
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Re: How could you? How dare you!
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by gery_giggles on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 08:23:12 PM AEST
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wow.....lots of pain and emotion....very deep poem....
luv always |
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Re: How could you? How dare you!
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by drummerchic18 on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 08:32:04 PM AEST
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| You are right, it happens too often. I am deeply sorry for what has happened to you or whatever had inspired you to write this. I know in my own life I also write about my friends and i "put myself in thier shoes" and write from that type of perspective. So for whatever brought on this inspiration I am deeply saddened for the pain. However, you create awesome work through the anger you possess. Never quit writing, whether it is a mere escape or a lifetime dream, you are very good at it. You use the words as images, the way most writers should. Great work. |
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