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claws of hell

Contributed by Hannah_Heaven on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 04:35:12 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

'you are the claws of hell that trap me and shut out my world...'
it starts with the little things
that build over my head
then the ice water surround me
pouring out your eyes and mouth
you blink out the blood
but you seem so happy in drownding me...
you stand on the mass of shadows
and you spit out that last vermon
and my heart crawls
and you catch it and squash it in your hand
it squirms to break free
and you bring your flesh eaten hand up to your lips
your looking straight at me
and you wink slyly as you bite my heart and swallow
i cry out in pain
and you laugh and i shudder
how could i of loved this creature
untill i opened my eyes
i never seen the real you
you forced me to be guided blindly
and look how far you took me
one last step and i would of fallen
of the cliff you have driven me
insanity is only a word
what im feeling is maddness surging
you gave me something to ride on
my own dreams
everyone tried to give me warning but i wasnt listening
love blocks out the world
but this wasnt love it was controlled will
blood sweat and tears
your eyes make me run inside
my feet stay were they are
your chest breathes in
your abnormal
deformed in the heart
twisted and scarred
you caress my body
i let you
i felt agony over love
but i let you minipulate me in everyway
i felt like a virgin
but now i feel dirt and scum
you scarred my body
you bruised my insides
verbilly you tortured me
and its this i must cry out in prayer
my lord save me from these claws of hell
and your eyes show a glint and something dark stares
you answer in a shrill voice unlike your own
'because you thought the world of me and prayed your sins to me..and you loved me like the powerful and believed my doings over all..iam the lord..to you and always will be...'
he laughs hard
and i scream
my head swells
and i feel the blood rushing
how could o of done this to myself

Copyright © Hannah_Heaven ... [ 2004-07-12 16:35:12]
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Re: claws of hell (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 05:22:56 AM AEST
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awww this is so emotional, i hope you feel better soon...*hugs you*

pixie xx

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