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Painted on Smile
Contributed by
Katie2008
on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 02:56:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The blood that flows from my veins screams out your name
As I lay here dying, this is what you've done to me
Memories of us together are running through my brain
The way you use to kiss me would drive me insane
I feel my time is getting shorter
My breath is getting shallow and my body growing colder
I bet you never knew that the way you use to hit me killed me too
Inside I was dying
But all you saw outside were bruises and a painted on smile
Every night I use to cry for you
Well, now my blood has left my body and I'm feeling rather numb
Perhaps a new and better life awaits me
So good-bye my love, you've killed me
Copyright ©
Katie2008
... [
2004-07-12 14:56:05]
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Re: Painted on Smile
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by _Raspberry_ on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 03:11:23 PM AEST
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Wow... This is an awesome write focused on a very serious subject. Very good
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Re: Painted on Smile
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by Archie on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 03:11:24 PM AEST
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| This is a good poem. No one should have to live in a relationship that is physically hurtful not to mention emotionally. Great write. |
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Re: Painted on Smile
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by brokensoul on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 03:22:38 PM AEST
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| wow its an amazing poem good job!! |
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Re: Painted on Smile
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by darkfairy1188 on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 04:16:05 PM AEST
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| wow. awesome job. i really love this poem (and u ;) ). |
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Re: Painted on Smile
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by justjonesy on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 01:47:39 AM AEST
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| Very powerful....awesome job really....I'm running out of things to say to all your very great poems...haha...keep it up |
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