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My Broken Mess
Contributed by
faffeee
on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 12:07:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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all i can see now is the dirty dark sky
the dull studs of burnt out stars
a banana moon isn't welcome anymore
not through this ruined view of paradise
and my empty, heartless mess
all i feel now is the loss of your fearless warmth
my fingers without yours entwined are worthless
human touch sends my skin crawling, repulsed
instead i live with your beautiful ghost haunting me
and my lonely, aching mess
all i know now is sight is no longer seeing without you to guide me
conversation crashes and dies without your laughter
life greys into the nothing you left me clutching
i lie here and my world can't be alive without you
my shattered, broken mess
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faffeee
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2004-07-12 12:07:20]
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Re: My Broken Mess
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by pixie on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 12:12:26 PM AEST
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very good write ........ I like your style, will be watching out for more from you....
pixie xx |
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Re: My Broken Mess
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by brokensoul on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 03:58:19 PM AEST
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| wow its deep its alot like something i would write |
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