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Looking for You
Contributed by
spaceotter
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Friday, 25th October 2002 @ 08:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I don't know where I am,
I thought you were beside me.
Yet, here I am alone-
Looking around for your smile, warmth.
I must have left you back there.
I'm not sure when or where.
I got so used to you being here.
I must have left you back there.
I don't know what to do,
We seem to be arguing over different themes.
Somewhere our common view was left to die.
We can't seem to meet on anything.
I don't know where I am.
There was a time we cherished each other.
A time when just seeing one another was enough to sustain.
Now we look at each other from different plains.
Trying to reach back and bring "that" love again.
I don't know where I am,
I thought you were beside me.
Yet, here I am alone-
Looking around for your smile, warmth.
I don't know where I am....
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2002-10-25 08:45:00]
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Re: Looking for You
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by Fwog on
Friday, 25th October 2002 @ 10:19:48 AM AEST
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How real and how sad,
Communication breakdown.
I know where you are coming from and am doing everything to rectify the situation.
Well done |
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Re: Looking for You
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 25th October 2002 @ 11:15:59 AM AEST
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So sad and so true to life... I've experienced this not to long ago.... but hopefully, I'm back on the right track.. Lovely write...
Jenni |
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Re: Looking for You
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by OreO on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 09:37:00 PM AEST
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This is so sad, very beautifully
written. I've been down this road
before, it's not a fun road to be on.
I hope things get better for you
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Looking for You
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by fluffy on
Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 07:22:51 AM AEST
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sad, but you show your feelings in this poet, which i really like. lots of people will feel like this aswell.
i am very impressed
fluffy
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