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Rag Doll (pleaze comment)
Contributed by
IncoherentGirl
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Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 11:02:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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A little boy of 2 sits on the floor playing with his toys
while he watches his dad kick his mom in the stomach
A little boy of 4 sits in the hospital bed with a busted head
While his mom tells the nurse he slipt and fell
A little boy of 6 plays hide in the closet and don't get found cause daddys
Drunk again
A little boy of 8 gets slung across the room cause he's 12 minutes
Late for dinner
A little boy of 10 covers his ears and crys cause mommy and
Daddy are fighting again
A little boy of 12 is put through hell while standing at his
Mothers grave
A little boy of 14 couldn't take another fight so he ended
His life last night
Now theres a little boy in heaven watchin over me and you.
Copyright ©
IncoherentGirl
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2004-07-12 11:02:58]
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Re: Rag Doll (pleaze comment)
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by Asatru on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 11:09:33 AM AEST
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| You wrote this well, it allows visuals in ones head...I have goosebumps. |
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Re: Rag Doll (pleaze comment)
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by liquidsunshine on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 01:31:37 PM AEST
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That gave me goosebumps--no lie. Haunting, chilling and all-too-true.
Eerily beautiful poem.
Lots of love and peace be with you,
Chelsea |
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Re: Rag Doll (pleaze comment)
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by white_rain_angel on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 02:43:35 PM AEST
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| This is a truly sad poem, im sorry that your friend had to live that way, and that his last moments here on earth weren't good ones. I just hope you can keep writing your feelings out, as that helps not to turn like me>> depressed, so i just keep on writing and try to get my feelings out i guess. im sorry your friend did this, but it was a sad but nice poem |
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Re: Rag Doll (pleaze comment)
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by drummerchic18 on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 03:02:05 PM AEST
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| this is extremely true. Great descriptions and imagery. Keep it up |
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Re: Rag Doll (pleaze comment)
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by brokensoul on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 04:01:03 PM AEST
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| that chilled me its really emotional it great |
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Re: Rag Doll (pleaze comment)
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by car21221 on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 08:32:18 PM AEST
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| it is so true and it is so sad there there is abuse in our lives which has been going on for many many years .i like your poem |
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