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Never Gonna Be
Contributed by
drummerchic18
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Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 10:09:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Never a day in my life do I want to be like you. I use to try and do the things that you do. You are to far from me yet always inside me.
I hate it when I look in the mirror and see your face staring back at me. I despise the fact that I’m your mini-me.
You grew up and ruined your life, but now me, now it’s my time. I don’t want to end up like you. I don’t want to do the things you do. I’m not gonna turn around and walk away.
I remember the days when we would stay up all night. I looked up to you cause I saw everything you went through. I use to think you were exactly what I wanted to be.
But you turned around and walked out that door. You aren’t the person I thought you were. I don’t think it would hurt so bad if you weren’t my blood. But now I’ve decided to look to you as everything I will never let myself come to.
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Re: Never Gonna Be
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by Asatru on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 10:23:07 AM AEST
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| You can really feel the emotion in here. I can kinda share what your going through though in the whole "I don't wanna be like you" part and talking about a family member. Keep writing. |
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Re: Never Gonna Be
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by IncoherentGirl on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 11:13:59 AM AEST
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| I can really relate to ur poem it reminds me of my dad.Keep writing. Please read RAG DOLL. |
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Re: Never Gonna Be
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by Archie on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 06:15:51 PM AEST
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| I can relate to this poem very well as I have an older brother we went different ways long ago |
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Re: Never Gonna Be
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by WestCPunk on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 08:48:22 PM AEST
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I know exactly what you are saying and it sounds like something i wrote lol! i guess we got a lot in common Nicely written!
Much love
Shelbi |
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