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They've Started Too Many Times!!!

Contributed by deathdrop on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 09:45:20 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Out of my fist,
Came an angry smack.
I’ve taken too much from you!
It’s about time I fought back.

Those names I’ve taken,
I won’t take again!
‘Coz, you see this fist!
It’s meant for your head!!!
I was so scared of you 3 before.
It feels stupid to look back on it now,
Why’d you run away Jasmine?
Was the little baby scared she’s be knocked down?

I should have hit you sooner!
Or maybe broken your nose,
‘Coz then that way,
You would keep your gob closed.
‘Coz I know if you dobb,
It’s me that’s getting done!
And this is the way the world works.
I’m lose when I’ve also won.

So why don’t I like you?
Er… ‘Coz you threatened to beat me up.
Only, the final line,
Is that YOU 3 are just gob!

I try not to be violent.
Not to blow my fuse.
But all I did was walk past you.
Then you started, but I wasn’t about to loose.

Why don’t I like you?
‘Coz you were threatening to stab my mate.
Go on then Hannah denie it!
As apologies are a just little too late!

I only walked past you!
And so you had to start.
So I went and smacked you!
Only missed, THAT MADE ME SPARK!
So you ran away Jasmine.
…Leaving Hannah and Tara behind.
And I stood and watched you.
Running off to cry!

So Hannah asked what they’d done.
And I gave it to her straight.
And she looked so mad at me,
Her eyes burning with hate!
So I told to hit me.
Or even better DO ME IN!
I was so scared to say that.
Afraid they would kick and bruise my skin.
I had my mates behind me.
Who then started giving them threats.
Leave Rosie ALONE or else,
Or we’ll do some thing you’ll regret…!





Copyright © deathdrop ... [ 2004-07-12 09:45:20]
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Re: They've Started Too Many Times!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by frohemiasweetie on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 10:25:52 AM AEST
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Delightfully confrontational. I hope you kicked their asses!!!


Re: They've Started Too Many Times!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 01:36:41 PM AEST
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This is the brutally honest reality isn't it?
Hopefully they'll get the point and grow up.
Lots of love and PEACE be with you,

Chelsea




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