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Going Down
Contributed by
parkman
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Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 06:04:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Thoughts in my mind, frightening
Images flashing, like lightening
Voices in my head, screaming
Bringing me down, so demeaning
Need to pop a pill, swallow
Release myself from, this wallow
Sadness surrounds me, enveloping
Depression must be, developing
Need to take a drink, sipping
Try to stop myself, from slipping
Further into this whirlpool and drowning
While thinking to myself, I’m frowning
Need to take a snort, cocaine
Release the tension from, my brain
Lift my spirits up, so high
Before I sink deep and die
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2004-07-12 06:04:15]
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Re: Going Down
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by pixie on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 06:06:32 AM AEST
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very dark, with great flow,
pixie xx |
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Re: Going Down
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by gery_giggles on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 06:40:50 AM AEST
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o i know this feeling,,,,it has good flow..good poem!
luv always |
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Re: Going Down
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by katyqueen35 on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 09:10:04 AM AEST
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VERY EMOTIONAL WRITE..
GOOD JOB.. |
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Re: Going Down
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by brokensoul on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 04:15:14 PM AEST
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| ive been there great write |
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