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a simple wish
Contributed by
co_cane13
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Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 11:33:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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i wish to hold you in my arms and never you go, to let time pass us bye
to hold you in my arms until the day i die
i wish to hear your every word and see your every smile
to hold you in my arms and kiss you for awhile
i wish to look into your eyes as you look into mine
to hold you in my arms until the end of time
i wish to massage you with my hands
and sooth you with my words
just tell me what to do
to prove my love to you
i wish to take you by your heart, and hold it close to mine
to never be apart, and let your love forever shine
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Re: a simple wish
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by emystar on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 11:36:27 PM AEST
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Your first true love is very lucky to have u.
Heavenly beautifull.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: a simple wish
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by pixie on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 05:15:38 AM AEST
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this is such a loving, caring write.
pixie xx |
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Re: a simple wish
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by matts_sweetie_04 on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 02:04:55 PM AEST
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I love your work so much. I can relate to all of it cause we are in the same position except I am the one on the other side of the situation. Keep up the wonderful writes! I know its hard but we can hang in there together!
Love~n~smiles!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: a simple wish
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by matts_sweetie_04 on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 02:05:05 PM AEST
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I love your work so much. I can relate to all of it cause we are in the same position except I am the one on the other side of the situation. Keep up the wonderful writes! I know its hard but we can hang in there together!
Love~n~smiles!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Emily |
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