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My Sore Tooth
Contributed by
tin
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Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 11:15:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
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As I lie in this chair
I hear drills and suction
Yet my only thought
Is of your seduction
If there ever was a contest
Aphrodite dare not compete
With your godlike beauty
And your heart so sweet
Your lustrous lips
Your jade green eyes
I now pray to the gods
That you'll soon be mine
But if sooner turns to later
And my bones grow weak
Your love and affection
Will be all I seek
So I hope to myself
That your eyes fill with joyous tears
As I deliver these words
To your delicate ears
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tin
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2004-07-11 23:15:48]
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Re: My Sore Tooth
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by katyqueen35 on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 03:02:01 AM AEST
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HMMM INTERESTING WRITE.
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Re: My Sore Tooth
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 09:21:49 PM AEST
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This is pretty good! If slightly strange at the thought of finding inspiration in a dentist's chair...
Nice work.
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Re: My Sore Tooth
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by Silent-No-More on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 10:04:56 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, tin!
I agree... interesting... and - um - a bit different in title and first stanza. But, I suppose, the mind doesn't always wait for a romantic setting to wonder off to romantic thoughts.
Very sweet. Thanks for sharing this!
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