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death of heros
Contributed by
InnerBeautyQueen
on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 10:06:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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crimson tears
fall on dead lips
as silver spears rip through
this is it
it's what we've fought for
the choice is up to you
set them free
or spare you life
you've only got two options
braver than me
you'll die and bleed
rather than take their offer
but, my love
i wish you'd listened
for their warnings were fair game
you didn't hear that
'none shall live'
their honest mouths pretained
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2004-07-11 22:06:55]
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Re: death of heros
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by Psyche on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 10:09:30 PM AEST
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| Erg.. with a husband in Iraq, this poem hurts my heart - and touches my fears as I think of the beheadings that ave occurred. I imagine it is written with your own visions/feelings - but this is what it brings up for me.... very touching. thanks. |
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Re: death of heros
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 09:59:32 PM AEST
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| never stop writing your brilliance. |
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