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Look what you did

Contributed by farmtowngirl on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 09:45:22 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I can't take it anymore
I want the pain to go out the door
It's not fair all the ***** I have to deal with
Gosh why does it always happen to me
I want to end it there's no point
Find a knife, find a gun, even some pills
It's not worth it anymore
Who needs a life when it's not worth living
Where are those pills give me them all
Drink the cold pepsi as the whole bottle goes down my throat
Feel the numbness come and laugh a bit
Walk woozy to my bed and lay down
See the pictures on my shelf of my so called "friends"
They don't need me I'm just a piece of *****
Tears start to fall now
I think of all the pain you caused me
Your the reason I'm doing this
Happy now I'm gone from your life
I'm going to erase you too but I have to erase everything then
See what you did to me!
I hate you!
The pills kick in I start to freak
I pray God will understand
Feel the pain leave my body
Finally I say
Soon I feel like I'm flying
I turn to see him shaking his head....

Copyright © farmtowngirl ... [ 2004-07-11 21:45:22]
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Re: Look what you did (User Rating: 1 )
by Ceres on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 10:52:29 PM AEST
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I really liked it. Even if it wasn't how you were feeling, it sounded like you did. It was very convincing. Loved it!
- Ceres

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