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The Allure Of A Home
Contributed by
blueheart
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Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 09:06:50 PM in AEST
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The smell of cookies waft through the air,
Hung family potrait welling with pride,
Sense of belonging carved within the walls,
A house where clasped trust resides.
Noisy neighbours irk the frame,
Silent nights when zest subsides,
Waves of solace glide around,
Childish fears, around they hide.
Familiarity sprawled in grace,
Within these rooms my life is honed,
Rising nostalgia traces each scene,
This is, for me, the allure of a home.
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blueheart
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2004-07-11 21:06:50]
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Re: The Allure Of A Home
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by Archie on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 09:14:31 PM AEST
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| This is an awesome poem. Thanks for reminding me what a home is like. |
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Re: The Allure Of A Home
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 09:14:33 PM AEST
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| Very homely : nice write |
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Re: The Allure Of A Home
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 09:18:04 PM AEST
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I am living in my ancesteral home. Many generations have walked these halls in love and warmth and protection. There truly is 'no place like home.' I was never totally satisified in life until I returned here where I feel completely safe and secure within these walls. No matter what they say, you can always go home. Even if it is only within your mind.
Rita |
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Re: The Allure Of A Home
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 09:39:31 PM AEST
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This poems discribes your wonderful home, right down to the walls and memories they honed!
I hope you the change to go back soon.....it's hard to be away.......the one word I would suggest to you, if you can't control your situation or change it......ACCEPT is the magic word.......try very hard just to accept your being away from that which you love.
Beautiful poem
Poetic hugs
consue |
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Re: The Allure Of A Home
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by Avarice_Riot on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 10:10:40 PM AEST
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| Your home sounds very homely and cosy.....well, we all have to leave home some time or the other to find ourselves and fend for ourselves...lovely write, it's gentle and touching. |
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Re: The Allure Of A Home
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by arden on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 10:49:33 PM AEST
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well i couldnt wait to get out of my house lol so i cant relate to this. but its a very nice poem. beautifully written. somewhat sad though. i liked it. well done. keep it up.
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Re: The Allure Of A Home
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by venkat on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 12:06:50 AM AEST
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| beautifully done..homely..very nice poem. venkat |
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Re: The Allure Of A Home
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by pixie on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 05:18:17 AM AEST
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trully amazing write Blueheart.
pixie xx |
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Re: The Allure Of A Home
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by emystar on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 05:33:37 PM AEST
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Wow, what kindda cookies?
I live in the home I grew up in but it's jus me-n-my animals here now.
Great write!
huggs,
emy |
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