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Daddy No More
Contributed by
WestCPunk
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Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 07:20:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Hiding in a corner
Screaming please no more
Why can't you see
You've done enough already
You need to stop what you're doing
And look at what you're ruining
You are the reason I am forever blue
You're turing me into
Someone I don't want to be
I blame you if I stay like this for eternity
Everything you've done is wrong
And you still have the nerve to think
That all you've done is right
You come home
Drunk every night
What a pathetic way
To waste your life
I'm not gonna be
This abused child anymore
I'm gonna walk out on you
And there's absolutely nothing you can do
Daddy no more
I'm walking out that door
And I'm through
With everything that involves you!
Copyright ©
WestCPunk
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2004-07-11 19:20:06]
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Re: Daddy No More
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by xxbreathlessx on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 07:27:44 PM AEST
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| wow thats powerful stuff, great job. |
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Re: Daddy No More
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by emystar on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 09:19:10 PM AEST
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Very sad but I firmly believe that alchohol eventually distroys every thing in it's path.
Hang in there and know that u aren't alone.
Abuse is bad no matter what 'cause it.
Very well written and I know how that feels as I've been around alcholics many times.
a person jus gets enuff.
prayer, peace, huggs, luv,
emy
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Re: Daddy No More
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by katyqueen35 on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 09:16:37 AM AEST
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Awww you poor thing..
Such an emotional write..
hang in there kiddo ..
I will pray for you..good write.. |
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