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Gray Hills Of Lust
Contributed by
pollo_picante1120
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Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 05:33:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Silent winds travel in this sky
Day by day they pass me by
These hills are dark and gray with lust
Our love we have, vanishing in the dust
Strands of grass stand high and tall
My once strong stance weakens and I fall
Catch this kiss and hold me tight
These gray hills stop this jeolous fight
Rumbling clouds of darkness and pain
Can you see us now, kissing in the rain
The love I once thought was lost and broken
Your words were insightful and unspoken
Gray hills and skies of blue
Made me realize this love was meant for you
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2004-07-11 17:33:32]
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Re: Gray Hills Of Lust
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by Archie on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 06:14:29 PM AEST
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| this is a good poem |
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Re: Gray Hills Of Lust
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 02:27:09 AM AEST
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Nice rhyme : good work:
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Re: Gray Hills Of Lust
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by freckle on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 08:50:38 PM AEST
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This is a sweet poem. The flow is good and your descriptions are unique and I like them.
Carol |
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