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To Be Near You
Contributed by
wachumiri
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Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 05:04:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Without you here
Before my sight
My world is simply
Endless night
This world alone
I cannot bear
I need you close
To drown each care
I need you close
To me each day
And this to God
I ever pray
This prayer to God
In heav'n above:
"To be near Carrie
For her I love"
"To be near her
That I love best
For then would I
Be truly blessed"
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wachumiri
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2004-07-11 17:04:06]
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Re: To Be Near You
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by Archie on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 05:38:06 PM AEST
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| This reads surprisingly like a song. I could make this into song lyrics easily; great job. |
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Re: To Be Near You
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 01:48:33 AM AEST
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Awww...
Cool piece. I love the rhythm of the first stanza.
Buck up, you two. What is it, two weeks? You'll live.
*freely and willingly commented by the ever-so-generous Andrew for his melancholy cousin David* |
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Re: To Be Near You
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by eatfresh22 on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 06:29:53 PM AEST
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Don't worry, Andrew, I came home a week early! Well, David, I loved that...especially since my name was in it and all again. Awwwww.....quite lovely. I am lonely without you too, but keep praying for me.
Love,
~Carrie~ |
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Re: To Be Near You
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by faith_my_eyes on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 02:49:08 PM AEST
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greaaaaaaaaaat...
MORE CORNBALL LOVE LAMENTS! MAKE IT STOP, PLEASE, MAKE IT STOP!!!
Just kidding.
Cute one.
Lots of love in Christ,
Em |
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Re: To Be Near You
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by anitajames on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 02:35:00 PM AEST
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It is so painful to be separated from the one you love and time seems to drag on and on doesn't it? Here's to happy reunions!
Ann |
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Re: To Be Near You
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by inoc on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 07:46:59 AM AEST
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this will cheer Carrie up I am sure....and hey yours is way, way BETTER!!!!
congratulations on a brilliant poem
*smiles* coni |
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