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the eyes of a child
Contributed by
blackholesun
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Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 04:08:22 PM in AEST
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the eyes of a child,so enocent and true and how they grow up is a reflection of you.
they dont start out angry,tormented or mean,kids just act on what they have seen,
so pick and fight and tear them apart,just know that all of this hate...you put in their heart
you are poisoning them with the lies that you tell,when all they want is your love,
god can hear you from heaven above
you say things like your father doesnt love me,he is a drunk stupid liar and should be hung from a tree,mom all of these things you say about dad it hurts us so much and makes us feel sad.
i never downed you.or the words that you say,but you will answer to god on your judgement day,so remember all you said the words cut to the bone,when you sit all alone in the days you grow old.
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Re: the eyes of a child
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 08:10:51 PM AEST
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I don't guess parents will ever understand that those angry morose things do affect and torment their children. Everything we say and do is reflected in the eyes of our children. Negativity, hatred and revenge should not be reflected back to us through their little sad eyes. This is a very strong emotional write. Congratulations.
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Re: the eyes of a child
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by pete on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 05:19:30 PM AEST
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Hi....thanks for your comment on my poem...Ode to my Son. Read your poem...found it moved me to hear the story from the other side...good work.
Send me an Email I'd like to talk to you and make a new literary friend.
Warm regards..............Pete. |
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Re: the eyes of a child
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by Gothchyk on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 09:57:05 AM AEST
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| Great Write, children do learn from those that they look up to as well as their parents and they pick up on all sorts of things. Amazing write, brings a lot thoughts to mind. |
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Re: the eyes of a child
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 09:34:31 AM AEST
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| what institution did you get this precious piece hung up in? The first 2 lines seem very familiar. I worked in mental health for awhile, maybe they had it posted there as well. Just a couple of notes here. you have some words misspelled: the first line (Innocent), and I should always we capitialized. After a comma you need a space. This is so sad. |
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